Feed Back on Rough Cut

1-Use of Mise en Scene
Not obvious where it is which adds to the thriller conventions.
2-Cinematography
Record player adds to the atmosphere.
The ink spots work well.
Some shots are confusing.
Some shots at the begining were good, however deterioated toward the end.
Very good shots of the record player.
3-Editing
Flowed smooothly.
Credits needed to enhance the film.
Too light, could be slightly more sinister.
reinforces the contradiction with the events and character.
4.Sound
messed up static at the beginning is good.
Music makes it seem like a tragic love story.
Contradicts the events/paper titles, and gives an insight into the killers personality.
Timing of music track, ad record player was good.
5-Genre conventions
Newspaper clippings work well.
not a clear link to a thriller.
Photos on the wall.
Scribbling on the faces.