Some feedback on the feedback of our project that we made after initial feedback.

For my final blog i would like to bring up the points made by my fellow classmates regarding our final cut of the thriller project.
FIRST THINGS FIRST cinematography we got immense feedback on the vinyl shots; which was expected (by Paul at least..., and then its still only down to interpretation).YEAH!!!!!! However a few people were a tad confused we apologise for any disconcerting effects this may have had upon the audience. The clips that were confusing was the car scene which was supposed to add a confusing element to our project. so basically thats all good. We also had good feed back of the clips that show the photos going onto the wall.

Apparently not enough tension was created which to some extent i do agree with i believe that some of our shots were drawn out too long. How ever we ran out of time to really do any thing about that but psssh.





From Paul's subtle and overwhelmingly immense evaluation of our cinematography to my evaluation of our evaluations on editing. We asked the kind audience what they thought
what the thought of the pace. Generally it was considered that it was quite slow, which, in comparison to the music is what we were aiming for. However, we had intended to try and get the white board picture build up scene to perhaps be faster,to build up more of a feeling of thee pace, determination and obsession of the man stalking the victim. We also asked the viewers to kindly to comment on the transitions, of which reactions were generally positive, and it was shown to be a good choice that we used transitions sparingly.